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 * **Who?** My parents and I.
 * **Where?** Tokyo, Japan.
 * **When?** in December, one week.
 * **What they did?** We visited Akihabara Street, we went shopping in Shibuya, we took pictures of Harajuku Street, we swam in the beach of Odaiba, we sang in a karaoke and we walked by Asakuza, the old zone of Tokyo.
 * **Why? (reasons for the trip).** Because we had winter vacations.

Hi Paula! How are you? I'm fine!

My parents and I went to Tokyo for the winter vacations, in December for one week. It was very cold! The first day, we arrived to the hotel. It was very beautiful! After, we visited Akihabara Street. It's very large! They were many shops of extraordinary items.The 'Otaku's street', a street for fans of anime, japanese cartoons. The second day, we went shopping in Shibuya, a modern street. The clothes were very expensive! The third day, we took pictures of Harajuku Street, it's very beautiful and large. The fourth day, we swam in the beach of Odaiba, under the snow! It was very cold, but it was an incredible experience. The fifth day, we went to a karaoke. It was my first time! We laughed a lot! The sixth day, we walked by Asakuza, the old zone of Tokyo. The temple was very old and beautiful, I took many pictures of him. Finally, the seventh day, we retourned to Spain. How was your holidays? I hope fine. Many hugs, Sara.


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Hi Paula! How are you? I'm fine!

My parents and I went to Tokyo for the winter vacations, in December for one week. It was very cold! The first day, we arrived to the hotel. It was very beautiful! After, we visited Akihabara Street. It's very large! There were many shops of extraordinary items. It's the 'Otaku's street', a street for fans of anime, japanese cartoons. The second day, we went shopping in Shibuya, a modern street. The clothes were very expensive! The third day, we took pictures of Harajuku Street; it's very beautiful and large. The fourth day, we swam in the beach of Odaiba, under the snow! It was very cold, but it was an incredible experience. The fifth day, we went to a karaoke. It was my first time! We laughed a lot! The sixth day, we walked by Asakuza, the old zone of Tokyo. The temple was very old and beautiful, I took many pictures of it. Finally, the seventh day, we returned to Spain. How were your holidays? I hope fine. Many hugs, Sara.

__ ** Newspaper article about a crime ** __


 * ** Crime: ** Robbery
 * **Place:** Trafalgar square - London
 * ** Time: ** Friday, 13th December. 18:30 p.m
 * ** Suspect: ** Damon Somerhalder
 * ** Victim: ** Ian Black
 * ** Other details: ** There was a witness who phoned the police. They discovered that the gun used in the robbery was a toy.


 * __Strange robbery__**

A few days ago, an interesting thing happened in London. On Friday 13th December, something unusual happened. Ian Black, a rich banker, was walking around the Trafalgar square while he was talking on his phone. According to **A** witness, at 8.30 p.m appeared a strange man. He walked slowly behind Ian, and when he had the opportunity, he took out of his pocket a gun. Ian refused to give<range type="comment" id="477332776_4"> her</range id="477332776_4"> money and his mobile phone to the thief, so the robber was angry and he started shoutING.

At the same time, a witness was watching what was happening and he phoned the police. Luckily, when the police arrived, the thief was still there, so they caught him. He was identified as Damon Somerhalder, a 'dangerous' robber. Or that they thought!

The surprising thing was that when the police <range type="comment" id="477332776_5">observed the gun of Damon</range id="477332776_5">, they discovered that it was a toy, not a real weapon!

Now, Damon will receive a punishment for the robbery, and Ian will continue his life as usual.


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A few days ago, an strange and surprising thing happened in London. On Friday 13th December, something unusual happened. Ian Black, a rich banker, was walking around Trafalgar square while he was talking on his phone. According to a witness, at 8.30 p.m a strange man appeared. He walked slowly behind Ian, and when he had the opportunity, he took out a gun of his pocket. Ian refused to give his money and his mobile phone to the thief, so the robber was angry and he started shouting.

At the same time, a witness was watching what was happening and he phoned the police. Luckily, when the police arrived, the thief was still there, so they caught him. He was identified as Damon Somerhalder, a 'dangerous' robber. Or that they thought!

The surprising thing was that when the police examined Damon's gun, they discovered that it was a toy, not a real weapon!

Now, Damon will receive a punishment for the robbery, and Ian will continue his life as usual.

=**__ Book review __**=

__Fact file__
 * **Name of book:** Night School
 * **Author:** C. J. Daughtery
 * **Date of publication:** 2012
 * **Characters:** Allie, Sylvain, Carter, Jo, Christofer, Gabe, Isabelle, Rachel and Nathaniel.
 * **Events:** For her bad behaviour, Allie is sent to Cimmeria, an isolated boarding school. There, she will meet good and bad people, and she will discover secrets about her life that she didn't know.
 * **Recommendation:** An incredible story with action, love and friendship for teenagers.


 * __Night School review__**

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Christi Daughtery wrote this adventure two years ago, when she wanted to renew her ideas and write books for teens. She didn't expect **IT**, but it was a great success.

I recommend this book because I love this types of stories with love and action. It is very interesting, exciting and surprising; you don't expect what will happen. Also, I love this writer because she was wrote other books of this type and she had very good ideas. It is one of my favourite books; I love it.

Night School tells the story of a problematic teenager girl that is sent to a boarding school for rich and noble people, but there is something strange, she isn't rich. Allie is confused, she thinks that she doesn't belong there, but it will be the opposite. The main characters in the story are Allie Sheridan and Carter West, but there are many secondary characters because Allie is surrounded by friends, loves and enemies. An interesting event in the story was when Allie heard a conversation between Isabelle, the director, and Nathaniel, a mysterious person. To her surprise, she discovered that she wasn't there for what she did in the past, Allie was there because there is the granddaughter of one of the most famous rich politicians in the world.
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Christi Daughtery wrote this adventure two years ago, when she wanted to renew her ideas and write books for teens. She didn't expect it, but it was a great success.

I recommend this book because I love this types of stories with love and action. It is very interesting, exciting and surprising; you don't expect what will happen. Also, I love this writer because she was wrote other books of this type and she had very good ideas. It is one of my favourite books; I love it.

= = =__ Snowflakes on strike! __=

Dear Jean, I have wonderful news! The strike has gone very well! It was difficult, but we are very happy. I write this email to inform you of what we have achieved. First and most importantly, we have holidays! They will send us to California in a refrigerator<range type="comment" id="505358574_1">,</range id="505358574_1"> we will enjoy the<range type="comment" id="505358574_2"> S</range id="505358574_2">un and beach! Also, in the winter, wen we fall in the floor, they have promised that they will collect us and transport all the snowflakes to a frozen lake, to relax our ice. <range type="comment" id="505358574_3">It's exhausting fall</range id="505358574_3"> from the sky! Finally, but not less important, they **WILL** give us scarves for the cold days and extra money in windy days. Get well soon! <range type="comment" id="505358574_4">Hugs, Sara.</range id="505358574_4">

Dear Jean, I have wonderful news! The strike has gone very well! It was difficult, but we are very happy. I write this email to inform you of what we have achieved. First and most importantly, we have holidays! They will send us to California in a refrigerator. And we will enjoy the sun and beach! Also, in the winter, when we fall in the floor, they have promised that they will collect us and transport all the snowflakes to a frozen lake, to relax our ice. Falling from the sky is exhausting! Finally, but not less important, they will give us scarves for the cold days and extra money in windy days. Get well soon! Hugs, Sara.
 * __Correction__**